The Man Standing On Platform Two The June 2020 story

by Richard Tearle 



THE MAN STANDING ON  PLATFORM TWO

(Photo by the Author)

There he stood, just as he always did day after day. The same spot, under the canopy, close to the clock, midway between platform edge and the station building.
   The day was neither warm nor cold. Early autumn, no sun visible but no wind to blow the clouds away. And although there was no rain either, he had his usual brown mackintosh on, hat perched firmly on his head. Clutched his briefcase tightly in one hand.
   A short whistle heralded the approach of a goods train running through on the middle line. The powerful locomotive had seen better days. Once she had been proud and gleaming: now the rust on her running plate was untended and the brown stains on her smokebox door had been caused by boiling water overspilling through an unplugged leak. Her paintwork no longer gleamed black but was covered in grease, grime and dirt. So thick was it that someone had cleaned away a small patch of the grey covering in order that her yellow painted cabside number could be recognised.
The empty wagons clanked through obediently, chained like slaves to each other and their master and then all was silent again.
   The woman was there again, across the tracks on Platform One. As usual, he wondered whether he should smile at her and maybe even wave, but he did not want his actions to be misconstrued. Perhaps one day he might mount the steps of the iron footbridge and cross the lines to the other platform. But he knew he never would.
   He stole a glance at his watch. A few minutes before the express was due. And then his train would soon follow, having been held at the previous stop to allow the more important service through. As if to confirm his thoughts, the home and distant signals on the gantry to his left swung upwards.
   The man sighed to himself. Sometimes he wondered what the point of it all was. This daily commute, the never changing routine of his life. Where did it get him?
   Absolutely nowhere.


He felt rather than heard the thrumming of the rails at first. He looked to the far end of the platform and, yes, there was the express. A short whistle, three tones combined into one discordant shriek and the backwards sloping front of the locomotive cleaving the air as it leaned into the gentle curve. It was past in seconds at a speed approaching ninety miles per hour. No ill tended machine this one! Gleaming in a colour he believed was called Brunswick Green it flashed by followed by a rake of chocolate and cream Pullman carriages, resplendent luxury with lamps on the lily white cloth covered tables. And then it was gone. Away to places unknown, Different sights. Through town and country alike. Through tunnels and under bridges, past roads and farms.



The signal arms bounced down before settling in to the 'Halt' position. His train would be pulling out now, ready to make its short but slow journey towards him and his waiting fellow passengers.
   No doubt the same faces would be seen, already seated or waiting at the doors to alight. The old man with the flat cap and the walking stick. The pretty young lass, the Teddy Boy in his Edwardian suit, slicked back hair and winkle picker shoes.
   Nothing changed.




Which is what was nagging at him all the time.
  The monotony, the lack of excitement. Not even any change to observe or delight in. He needed something new in his life. Something different.
   Something thrilling. But what?
   Something had to change. But how could he do that?
 How many times had he been through this conversation with himself?And how many times had he ever come close to finding a solution to his frustration? His life, he concluded, was so monotonous that he even asked those same question every day!
   The signals arced lazily upwards again. The man on platform two sighed deeply.



His train approached, slow and slowing more. Running tender first – even that was the norm. The same shade of green as the express before it, but nowhere as clean.
   It passed him before jerking to a halt. Yes, there was the old man, the  young woman and the Teddy Boy. In their allotted positions as ever.

And then he heard a loud voice from above him, declaring crossly, 'Oh no! Not again!' just before a giant hand descended from overhead, detached the de-railed tender of the model train and set it properly back in place on the tracks of the railway layout.


(photo by the author)

© Richard Tearle


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  1. As someone who had a model railway as my pride and joy for a few years I loved this story! Oddly enough (or perhaps not so oddly) my layout was Great Western ... and I now use GWR a lot as we moved to Devon in 2013.
  2. Thank you Helen!! Mine is mostly ex LNER but it poses as a Heritage Railway so I can run what I like!!!
  3. I just loved this story!!
  4. Thank you so much, Annie. Very much appreciated xx
  5. I *knew* what was coming, but it still came as a surprise!
    Would I be right in saying Brunswick Green and Signal Orange?
    It's been a long time!
  6. Thanks Dan! If you mean Humbrol enamels, then yes!
  7. Reading this proved a delight way to start the morning. Not only beautifully written, but this is so clever, so sweetly humorous and so original. The twist reminds me of my childhood, yet the characters are quite believable. Cheers


    1. Thank you Barbara! And do remember that you and your co-conspirators are the reasons why I am writing more and having the confidence to do so!

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